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At my Auntys

First on a lovely Friday afternoon me my mum my baby sister and my brother packed our bags to go to my Auntys Debbie's house. We dashed into our bedrooms and packed our bags as fast as a shark preying on  kahawai

After a little while we were finished packing our bags. We all said, “Bye” to Uncle Naru and Puna. Then we left while we were going down the driveway we saw Te hanah. We asked her do you want to come with us to Aunty Debbie's. She replied back umm ok so we shot up to her house, but her mum was not home.

But then we saw her at the marae so my mum told Me and Te hannah to say at her a house so she could pack some clothes. My mum went up to the marae on the truck and asked Aunty Sue and Aunty sue said ok.

So my mum came back down and said you're allowed we had finished packing Te hannah's bag so we jumped in the truck and headed off to kaikohe we were a bit hungry so I asked my mum I we could go to Mcdonald's she commented back yes.

So we got something to eat and headed off to keri. After my dinner I was feeling a bit sleepy so I went to sleep.

When I woke up I heard the truck stop so I looked out the window and we were there my Aunty came out and said hi guys and gave us a hug then we went inside. Aunty Debbie showed us our bed. Me and Te Hannah said goodnight to everyone and then we all we to sleep.

The next morning we woke up and watched a bit of tv. My mum said should we go out for breakfast we all said mmm that will be nice. So we all got ready and hopped in the cars when we were coming out our my Auntys road we saw heaps of people we jumped out of the car and went to go see what it was.

It was harley davidson's going past there was 2000 going past.

After they slowed down we went to paihia and we to breakfast. Instantly, we looked for a spot to sit then boom my eyes found the best spot  in the sun and right next to the ocean was a blue  glittery blanket. The lady came over to us and said what would you like today we ordered our breakfast the lady said your meal will be here soon.

We waited a little while then the lady came with all of our food and drinks we had a amazing breakfast it was a nice a shoving 100s of lollies into my mouth. me and Te hanah had bacon eggs toast and lemon lime and bitters for our drink and my mum  my Aunty a big burgers  and my brother and sister a some cooked chips with sauce.  

After we had something to eat we went to the aquarium there we enormous crayfish, snapper, gold fish, kahawai,colorful fish and heaps of other colorful schools of fish they were beautiful and that was my amazing weekend.               

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